Holding the dogs down
annoying and tiring
on the sled just gliding along
nothing dry just wet
work together
sprinting, walking crawling
smoke and wood
are your companions
strangers become friends
cant give up
cant give in
just keep going
push the dogs
congradulate them
encourage them
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parker,
this is a really great poem.
i like the "cant give up, cant give in" part its really like smooth and works well.
at the end you could make it more obviouse who you are encouraging.
great job,
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