this gives a very warm feeling about bats as if they are warm loving creatures
you should describe what your talking about more because other that your title i could have never guessed what you were talking aboutgood jobben
i like the whole idealast line is 6 sylabbles. nice flowbut fix up the last line to make it onley 5
i really like how you refer to bats in teh last linewell done
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this gives a very warm feeling about bats as if they are warm loving creatures
you should describe what your talking about more because other that your title i could have never guessed what you were talking about
good job
ben
i like the whole idea
last line is 6 sylabbles.
nice flow
but fix up the last line to make it onley 5
i really like how you refer to bats in teh last line
well done
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